tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8247621890052258202.post1018090158677288123..comments2023-03-26T15:14:29.380+02:00Comments on Lunar Cactus Animation: Bullies StoryBoardDavoliohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09788805189567471758noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8247621890052258202.post-48654151432208304922009-01-25T01:57:00.000+01:002009-01-25T01:57:00.000+01:00Fresh eyed to this project and doing a 'cold read ...Fresh eyed to this project and doing a 'cold read 'of the board, (and the one Maarten G. sent me) I find it impossible to grasp what the idea is that you are trying to communicate. Remember: first on the lists of requirements to communicate a story is CLARITY. You can draw like rings around the moon ( and you guys surely can) but if your audience doesn't know what is going on you fail as a storyteller and lose them. I'll try to be more specific in my reply to M.Wilberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00650628194519224647noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8247621890052258202.post-81629141208736663712009-01-23T11:53:00.000+01:002009-01-23T11:53:00.000+01:00I'm almost there Ces, but your suggestion means a ...I'm almost there Ces, but your suggestion means a new shot of the panel. And taking some time to have the audience read the 'hair-choices'. Maybe even an extra shot to root the panel in the dashboard (now DJ-equipment :). I'm not sure if that fit's the pace I'm desperately trying to keep. 30 sec's is devilish in choices to make.<BR/>:)M-Jayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11507011044764997468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8247621890052258202.post-43972996621552967452009-01-22T17:15:00.000+01:002009-01-22T17:15:00.000+01:00In my first storyboard I had a control panel where...In my first storyboard I had a control panel where the bullies could choose from a selection of wild hairdos, that as M-Jay suggests may connect to their helmets...:-)Davoliohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09788805189567471758noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8247621890052258202.post-82451791559343040332009-01-22T10:41:00.000+01:002009-01-22T10:41:00.000+01:00Yes, we had the same feeling and were discussing a...Yes, we had the same feeling and were discussing a transition too. Some pill their ship produces and they take. Something going through a tube to their helmets... you know, get all the corkey stuff out of the way to get to a solution.<BR/>It has my attention for sure, but to be honest I tackle the problem when I get there.<BR/><BR/>First things first, I'm not in a hurry.<BR/><BR/>Since I have a VJ who already want's to use 'clips' for his club-nights and since 'disco' is a theme here, I think you like the idea of me checking all the DaftPunk live-sets at the moment. The design will definitely alter from this too :)M-Jayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11507011044764997468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8247621890052258202.post-1273548735910384302009-01-22T00:36:00.000+01:002009-01-22T00:36:00.000+01:00A nice simple premise. This stb is already quite n...A nice simple premise. This stb is already quite nice...I'll be interested to see where it goes from here.<BR/><BR/>The only point that I feel is a little unclear here is the moment where the bullies reveal their new haircuts. I have a feeling you guys are already way past this...but anyway. A simple connection from the hairy alien to the new haircuts would do the trick. Have us see that the bullies place the full set of hair of the alien on top of their skulls. They can style it totally crazy once the connection is made, but cutting cold to the styled hair mode is too far a bridge. Just a thought. :)Fons Schiedonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09527157799785215484noreply@blogger.com